[attr="class","acctitle"]please revise,

[attr="class","accbody"]okay domino! i appreciate yr character here but unfortunately there are a few issues. we'll deal with his powers first since that's easier innit:

1) sleep manipulation is an issue - particularly as it is actually something like dream manipulation rather than sleep. his ability to manipulation dreams and nightmares crossed into domination power territory and thus is banned - as cool as inception powers are! this is particularly as your phrasing of his power is quite unclear. for example:

"Kaoru is able to force upon, as well as control, the sleep patterns of others, as well as his own."

and

"There are limitations to this ability. Such as Kaoru only being able to manipulate the dreams of those already sleeping – he cannot force sleep upon someone."

contradictions - you say that kaoru is able to forcefully control sleeping patterns but not? a little confusing! additionally, latter on you mention that he can like control and influence people's dreams but that is too alike to will manipulation for us, especially since you say he can "inflict severe mental and psychological damage. He can also forcefully keep someone in a deep state of slumber for a prolonged amount of time, even against their will if they cannot force him from their dreams". like, no doubt a cool power for a hero in a movie to have but as this is a rp with other people you need to have limitations - it's too op otherwise keeping people in looong slumber! hey, even the inception gang had a time limit.

all the technicalities aside, manipulating people's dreams is a no. hypothetically, the ability to visit dreams might be okay but that seems quite null. if you want to discuss these limitations or ideas for the power, please pm PIDGE or another staff member.

2) on another note, it's a rather more grey area compared to the "that's power's banned", but i'm afraid that kaoru's history does not fit in with the grand scheme of vireximus university's world.

i can see that you've tried to do a past that's super ambitious and original but in this universe, governments do not perform super secret experiments on superhumans - the focus is instead on the interactions between companies and superheroes. governments across the world are forced to be small government re: those with superpowers. allowing a character to be one of the few successful in a government experiment, as well as being a spy, golden boy of the japanese media and in a totally different scandal outside the current plots is not really something that can happen in the grand scheme of the world. additionally, it feels like favouritism to give such a big and privileged role to someone on the site where it sounds something like should be a canon role - which it wouldn't b/c government is hands-off re: superheroes.

we the staff actively encourage people to ask what's okay in light of the site's universe!! if you have a super cool idea you can totally run it by us so we can say whether it's okay. if you want to ask something in revising kaoru's history, feel free to pm one of us DOLLAR, DEE or PIDGE or post in the inquiries board!

but for now, the final verdict is that kaoru being part of a government experiment is a no. feel free to revise his history so that companies play a bigger part of his life and if you need some hand with what's good or not, pm!

3) "germaphobe" is a neurosis rather than a negative personality trait. feel free to mention his germaphobia in his history but you will have to replace its presence in personality with a negative trait.